Age when it happend: 19
Where it happened: Movie Theatre
Langauge: English
Sex: Male
Rating: 5
Category: Straight
Where it happened: Movie Theatre
Langauge: English
Sex: Male
Rating: 5
Category: Straight
Just in case the author of “Writing Style Critique” doesn’t know it, I believe that probably most people put paragraphs in their stories, however when they are published on this site, they find that whoever edits them has put them in one solid paragraph, thus making for difficult reading. I know this happened to me when I wrote my story, and I am a fairly decent student of English and writing.
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