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Writing Style Critiques

Langauge: English
Sex: Male
Rating: 4
Category: Straight

This is an incredible website of erotic stories! Better than porn! It paints word pictures of people, and relationships, that builds up to performing SEX ACTS!

However, after scanning over many of the stories, it’s easy to spot the hundreds of stories told that’s been penned by a handful of authors.

How can one make such a claim? Easy! Compare the storylines and scenarios of a male and female going from being fully clothed to fucking each other.

There are storylines that redundantly tells of how the male/female arouse each other, with the guy taking off his “pants and boxers”. Gee! Lots of guys wear underwear briefs, but they seem to be in a miniscule minority with the stories told in this website.

This same redundant storyline also tells how the female sucks on the guy’s cock and gets him to come. Then, miraculously, the guy can become erect again, almost immediately, and puts his cock in the female’s pussy.

The same storyline has the sex act scenario going from the missionary position, to the female on top, then having it go to a “doggy style” position.

The same storyline also tells of the remarkable sexual stamina of the male, able to fuck for 20~30 minutes before cumming. Then after cumming, he can get it up again and fuck some more.

The above storyline scenario, that’s been written countless amount of times in this website, also shows a consistent style when it comes to sentence structure [especially with run-on sentences], syntax, spelling, abbreviations, slang terms, and the lack of paragraph breaks with the written narrative [making it difficult to read the stories].

May I suggest [and please don’t take any offense with this] to that author of the above storyline scenario [repeated many times in this website] that you are in a “style rut” with your writing. If there’s one thing you can do with your writing, it is to put paragraph breaks with your stories. I’ve put appropriate paragraph breaks with this narrative, and doesn’t it make for easier reading than that of a solid block of print?

Then, there’s another style of storytelling in this website that reads like excerpts from romantic/erotic novels. This involves the encounter of the male/female, the building up of the sexual tension between the two, the erotic way it is described how the both of them consent to sex, the sex act itself, and the aftermath of the encounter after they have parted their ways.

The romantic/erotic [multiple] stories told in this website also shows clues that they were penned by a single person. The storyline scenarios, the sentence structures, and the multiple paragraph breaks [making for easy reading] are found multiple times in this website.

Finally, there are those stories where the author WRITES IN ALL CAPS! Making for difficult reading. Again, the ALL CAPS stories looks like the work of a single author.

Either there are numerous people out there copying each other writing styles and storyline scenarios, OR, several people haved penned many many of the stories told in this website.

To all the authors submitting their stories to this website: You are living in a marvelous time where you can post your stories, where they can be read by millions worldwide! Potentially, you have a larger reading audience with this website than most renown print authors, of past generations, where their writings were limited to print books, magazines, and newspapers.

This is a remarkable website that can arouse individuals with words, and not get grossed-out that one can find on picture porn websites.

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